6 responses to “Violent Ends”

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   Timothy Price

   March 4, 2022

   We certainly hope for a peaceful ending. Emotional, biting, and poignant.

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   Yernasia Quorelios

   March 4, 2022

   💜 USE (Ultra Sensitive Empath) someone who KNOWS!!! beyond Constricting, Conventional Education; ergo Exist, Experiment, Experience and FUCKING WELL LEARN!!! or Grow Grumpy and Old then Die a Slow and Miserable Death Mourned by Few and Celebrated 🍾 by Many

   …💛💚💙…

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   Yernasia Quorelios

   March 4, 2022

   ♣️ Clubbing – ‘All Quiet On The Western Front’ – Clubbing

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   Doug

   March 5, 2022

   I like this poem in its joie de vivre. Indeed, now what. This is a puzzle because I’ve written some poetry in a similar style to this, but lately I’ve been rejecting mine. I’ve done tears on the rocks and ripples and tickles, but sometimes it’s all a little too vague without enough details to grasp a raison d’être — it’s like trying to rebuild a house without knowing anything about cement or bricks or how to lay them down in the right order. Some people don’t know how to rebuild or build in the first place, or how to find and finance a bricklayer and his minions and bosses and friends. So, sometimes metaphors get out of control with their vagueness. On the other hand, narrative poetry has its problems. I’ve been through my first 400 poems that I’ve edited and not erased (and many more torn up). Along the way, there have been very few comments, and it’s gotten worse (maybe it’s something about the updates).

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   utahan15

   March 11, 2022

   george harrison b side of all those years ago. teardropsz

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   DiosRaw {Amber Victoria Chittock}

   April 2, 2022

   ♥️🌹

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