Bunk Beds — Diamonds in the Rough {9}

From a couple Oklahoma girls…who earned their pearls.

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Injustice: My Bell Jar Diaries

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Dark in the night

A little hand reaches up from the bottom bunk

We shared our worlds — asleep and wide awake

Our lives then, made our lives now — that feeling makes me shake

Shake their lies and hypocrisy of the day off — Get it off me!

You’ll never understand. You’ll never see. No one will look up —

Until I scream — What’s wrong with me?!

Bunk beds he drug us out of in the dead of the night, what he shaped us to be

The bunk beds they gave us, like most things — made us tough

No matter what we became — it was never enough, for any of us.

***

Top bunk, under the blanket, flashlight, with a book, or my Sony Walkman

An hour and another passes, I do it again and again

Whispers and sniffles, muffled crying in the worst way

Always praying for a better day

We had to take the brunt of it

Not sure for what this was meant

Though, I have to give you credit for your badgering

All that ducking and swerving

Now — look — it made me a Work of Art!

I grew up and gave myself a brand new start

***

Oh! Purpose and Peace come find me!

The wind whips my hair, setting my doubt free

The magic that flows in you and me

No one really knows how deep this goes

Deeper than you can ever imagine — We are tough!

Yes, we are diamonds in the rough!

Bunk Bed Burdens — Oh, Lord, we’re hurtin’!

Can you hear me?! Can you hear us?!

Distant fading prayer requests from a couple little Oklahoma girls.

Won’t you grant them a few pearls?

10 responses to “Bunk Beds — Diamonds in the Rough {9}”

  1. sounds like abuse
    but why and for what use?
    you may date your father
    did i wed my mother?
    noooooooooooope!

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  2. Timothy Price Avatar
    Timothy Price

    All the cuts can they shape perfect diamonds? Not too shallow, not too deep. Well proportioned, Brilliant, on fire. Scintillating?

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    1. Yes. Blasted all different kinds of cuts…. I’d like to think I am scintilllating. What a beautiful word! Gorgeous…

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      1. Timothy Price Avatar
        Timothy Price

        I’m sure you flash and sparkle when moving in the light.

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  3. What a beautiful and unique diamond, always shiny. Powerful and moving piece, Eleanor. Brilliant as always.💕

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    1. Thank you, Grace! 😉

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      1. You are so welcome, Eleanor.💕

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  4. Is it possible that under the diamond-hard surface there hides a soft fragrant rose petal? Blessings, Peter

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