Redemption is on the horizon.
Fear eclipses truth
Logic demands proof
Confess before it’s too late
The end is nigh
For you — for me
Tempests of destruction — we
Nothing gained, nothing lost
Yet we will pay the lofty cost
Fires of the mind burning bright
Flickers of atonement within sight
Limited Atonement.
“Redemption certain or
Redemption none
It’s predestination
Foreknown by
The One”
Or is it?
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Ooohhhhhh snap! Your philosophical words ping off the page like rain on hot tin roof!
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Your philosophical poems heat the roof. Mental porn with a lot of deep thought.
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I aim to please!
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You deliver the goods on philosphy and deep thinking, which are always a pleasure to tangle with. Your tales of whoa are not so easy to deal with.
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My professors would be happy to hear that! As am I. That is completely understandable, these waters run deep.
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Fear is the essence of the unknown
Logic is an absolute and will be
Confess that you fear the unknown will relieve some of the fear
The end will come when it’s time
For all it will be as it should
Tempests of destruction —we can avoid if we have truth
Nothing ventured nothing gained or lost
Yet we will pay cost if the venture is untrue
Fires of the mind help us discover the truth
Atonement will result in the truth
Thoughts of “The Old Man”
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WOW, I am humbled and honored by your words, sir! Thank you for such a wonderful and thoughtful comment! How beautiful.
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Beautiful poem.
Your line “Fires of the mind” reminds me of a quote from Dostoevsky about lighting a fire in the minds of men.
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My goodness, thank you! It’s not everyday a girl gets compared to Dostoevsky! Your comment has put the biggest smile on my face 😃
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👌👌👌✒🌹 the script played a thousand times, yet every time it was the first time
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😉 Thank you
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Delightful Eleanor, fantastic!! 🐲🐉♥️🙏🏻
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Thank you, hun! I am so happy to delight you, my anam cara! 😉
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♥️😘🌹
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proof youth
poof
nope
cope
is hope
domain
e l e a n o r
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Thank you! This is awesome.
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Such beautiful wisdom, Eleanor. Love it.💕❤️💕
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Thank you, Grace! 😉
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My pleasure .💕❤️💕
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“Nothing gained, nothing lost”. Wonderful poetry shared dear Eleanor. Hello from Michigan and I agree.
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Hey there, John! Thank you, my friend, I appreciate you 😉
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You are welcome dear Eleanor.
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If atonement were necessary, who hath it within their reach? The purveyors of atonement make their offers on the street corners, but their cries are drowned by wisdom who beckons all to receive her and live forever.
Layde Eleanor, thou art a genius indeed. Thank you for the challenging share. Blessings, peter.
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Oh, Peter. Thank you for your fantastic comment! I don’t know about genius! I’m not the one who so succinctly spoke of atonement in a single sentence! That. That is talent! I admire and respect the mind that these words flow from. Iron sharpens iron, my friend.
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Long may we sharpen iron. Bless you.
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You have described humanity accurately, Eleanor!
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Thank you 😊 I appreciate you, Susi!
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You’re very welcome, Eleanor! 🙂
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