Tree of Immortality

Inspired by three lovely ladies, We โ€” Dickinson, Plath, and Me.

A Tree I am

Small but strong

My branches bend in the wind

They sway rustling a soulful song

These roots run deep

My leaves sometimes fall

But never a wind nor tornado

Never a strike of lightning will make

Nor a roar of thunder will shake

NO โ€” None could create the worst thing of all

POISON. It drips salaciously from your lips

One drop is all it takes

One drop drips and death it makes

No other choice is given

One drop โ€” One chop

The Tree that is Me becomes the pages your precious books are printed upon

The pages for the notes you play your music from

The very same pages I wrote this poem on

So, I will NEVER really be gone.

Line from Sylvia Plath’s, I Am Vertical https://allpoetry.com/I-Am-Vertical

46 responses to “Tree of Immortality”

  1. henhouselady Avatar
    henhouselady

    Thank you for sharing this post. I loved the way you pointed out the tree makes creativity possible through the paper we write and make music on. The pictures you shared are beautiful.

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    1. Well, thank you very much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on my work. I couldn’t choose just 1 picture so I used them both. They sure are pretty, aren’t they? Actually, just learned of their beautiful existence: Jacaranda Trees.

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      1. In memory of UB-40’s Brian Travers, a founding member and the band’s saxophonist, here’s my favorite song with Jacaranda trees in the lyric: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_40VDAX3r4g

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      2. Thank you, Morgan!

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  2. Love it! ๐Ÿ’œ

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    1. Thank you, my dear! ๐Ÿ’– ๐Ÿ’– ๐Ÿ’–

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  3. Timothy Price Avatar
    Timothy Price

    Trees tell and retell all the stories in life, death and afterlife.

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  4. I could just feel the strong impact at the end, all through the poem there was a tempo, which got oh so loud at the end! Beautifully written. I have never thought about it this way, a tree can live a thousand lives even after it dies.
    And the picture was just fabulous, quite mesmerising at it!

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    1. OH! YAY! Thank you so much for noticing. That’s what I was going for. ๐ŸŽ‰๐ŸŽŠ๐ŸŽ‰ I must admit, I love that picture so much it has become my laptop background. Very glad you enjoyed this. ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  5. This is so wonderful … I really like it, Eleanor. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’œ

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    1. Thanks, Sophia! Always happy to hear that enjoyed my work and I want you to know I appreciate your continued support and encouragement.

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      1. You’re welcome, dear Eleanor. My pleasure. I’m always here. I enjoy your work. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿค—

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  6. Omg!! Beautiful๐Ÿคฉthe poem and the trees as well!

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    1. Thank you so much, Riya! I’m glad you liked it. I really appreciate that you took the time to read and comment! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿค—

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      1. Thank you! ๐Ÿ’

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  7. Oh my gosh, that’s gorgeous!! โค โค โค

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    1. ๐Ÿ’– Thank you, Meg! I know, right? I love it so much I made it my laptop background!

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  8. Beautiful connection, deep and powerful. I love the comparison to trees, and the gifts exchanged. ๐Ÿ’™

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    1. I’m very glad you enjoyed it. As always, thank you for your kind words. ๐Ÿ’ I’m so happy to continue to learn from you and grow as a writer. I admire and respect your work, it is beautiful!

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      1. I did, enjoy it very much. โค๏ธ Aww, thatโ€™s so kind, my friend, thank you. I appreciate you, and love your work! Have a lovely weekend. ๐Ÿ’•

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  9. Pretty thoughts and words.โค๏ธ

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    1. Why thank you, thank you very much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and make such a nice comment. ๐Ÿฅฐ

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      1. You are very welcome!

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  10. Beautifully expressed about tree and the picture is amezing. Well written ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐ŸŒนโฃ๏ธ

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    1. Priti, thank you for your kind words! I’m so pleased you enjoyed it. Appreciate you and your support. ๐Ÿ’

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      1. ๐Ÿ’žโ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ™‚โฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ’๐Ÿ‘Œโค๏ธ๐ŸŒท๐ŸŒนMy pleasure. God bless you ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
    A Wonderful poem shared by a talented writer.

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    1. John, thank you so much for sharing my work. I’m honored and humbled. Greatly appreciate you!

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      1. You are welcome dear Eleanor.

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  12. A amazing poem dear Eleanor. We must be like the willow tree. Dance with and freely with life storms.

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    1. Thanks, John! I’m so glad you liked it. Yes, I agree with your eloquent words. I appreciate you taking the time to make such a kind and thoughtful comment ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. I loved the poetry and you are welcome dear Eleanor.

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  13. Fairy Queen Avatar
    Fairy Queen

    As I said in my blog, we have to plant trees in our gardens, it’s very important. We have to save Nature and trees ๐Ÿ˜‰ Your post is very besutiful for its meaning ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

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    1. Thank you, Fairy Queen! Yes, of course! I agree. I appreciate you for taking the time to leave a comment. Very glad you enjoyed it.

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  14. Hi Elenor,
    Lovely to read your beautiful writing and surprised it took this long to find you, Timothy was singing you praises and I too am a good friend of Jeffs. I’m now following you… visit something when you get a chance.
    Blessings,’
    Cindy

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    1. Hi there Cindy,
      Thank you so much. I’m very happy we finally connected! AAAAWWW…they are such sweethearts. Thank you for following me and I really appreciate you taking the time to read my post. Can’t wait to check out your blog!

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      1. Hi Elenor,
        You’re so welcome! Meeee too! They are the best and your writing speaks for itself. I’ll look forward to it your visit! happy Saturday. ๐ŸŒท๐ŸŒท๐ŸŒท

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      2. Thank you, Cindy! You are a sweetheart!
        ๐Ÿ’ ๐Ÿ’ ๐Ÿ’

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      3. My pleasure!๐Ÿ’–

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  15. Beautifully written!๐Ÿ’œ

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    1. Thank you so much, Rageshree. I appreciate you taking the time to read and leave such a kind comment!

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  16. wow – this poem really walks the fine line between darkness and light, Eleanor – well done!

    โค
    David

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  17. David, thank you, my friend! I appreciate your comment! ๐Ÿ’– ๐Ÿ’– ๐Ÿ’–

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  18. DiosRaw Avatar
    DiosRaw

    How beautiful. โ™ฅ๏ธ

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