Soul Surrender

Listen to yourself, every part, but remember in the end it’s your Soul that will reveal your brand new start!

Yours Truly

Skipping stones

Across the Irish Sea

Standing on the banks waiting for the water to speak to thee

Splashing back and forth like a cruel unchanging mock

Of your Mind, your Heart, your Soul—in an unsettling gridlock

Each one in a helpless conflict

And the Mind itself remains a mystery

You find yourself floundering, yet in an act of hesitant bravery

Following your Heart but it grew too heavy to hold itself together

Alas! You see—all that is left is the Soul that must surrender!

23 responses to “Soul Surrender”

    1. Thank you, Jeff! I’m glad you liked it! I really appreciate you taking time to read and make a comment.

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      1. I did, indeed. You’re most welcome, Eleanor. Is my complete pleasure. ā¤ā¤

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  1. And then you encounter a soul that changes everything…

    and makes surrender a whole new deal.

    I mean…
    you’ve wandered into the deepest dreams I have ever had…
    with your own.

    And with a smile that sits directly on your heart.

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    1. Oh, and… šŸ’–ā™„ļøšŸ§”šŸ’›šŸ’ššŸ’™šŸ’œšŸ’–

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    2. Beautiful! Thank you! Sending you love and light! XOXOXOXO šŸ˜‰

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    3. You are truly a wordsmith!

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  3. So so true! Beautifully written! Amazing blogšŸ˜€

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    1. Why thank you, BookWorm! I appreciate your compliments! šŸ˜‰

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      1. 😊

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  4. I have spoke to the sea often. The sea told me. Find more sea and more tropical places. A wonderful poem dear Eleanor.

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    1. I wish I could ask the sea what I should do. Where I should be. But I’m landlocked at the moment. I’m very happy to enjoyed the poem! Thank you for commenting it helps me stay on track and feel encouraged. Appreciate you!

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      1. You can find a river, a lake. The water does listen dear Eleanor. You are welcome my friend.

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      2. I keep that in mind šŸ˜‰

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      3. The river flowed toward the sea dear Eleanor.

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  5. Very beautiful

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    1. Thank you! I appreciate your comment and for taking the time to read some of my work. I’m glad you enjoyed it!

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  6. Beautiful song, Eleanor. Like it! Thank you. ā¤ļøšŸŒŗ

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    1. Thank you! You’re a sweetheart! 🄰

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  7. You’re welcome ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø

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  8. Love this

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